Third Draft of The Wrong Turn

This is the third draft of my film and I think this is a large improvement on the previous drafts there is however there are still a few shots I need to change:

• The first is I need to re-shoot when Alice turns the radio off in her car as it is quite dark and therefore the camera quality doesn't look as good as it would if the lighting was better.
• Another change I need to make is when Alice walks up to her bedroom and is sitting on her bed and the continuity is not correct when she is walking out of her bedroom back down the stairs as the shots do not match and don't flow correctly.
• The final change I need to make is when Alice sees somebody in her garden, of the person in her garden as this was shot in the dark and therefore is very dark and the continuity is in-correct as you can see outside in various other shots it is light outside and looks odd so I am going to change this shot when the sun is setting and it is not totally dark but is not shot in broad day light.