In the second draft of my film I realised that it would be a lot better if the ending didn't have any speech and it ended just as she was running away after seeing and hearing something in her house. And because of this I have realised that another part of my film which could then be cut is when Alice meets Becky in the street for the first time; this is now not needed as I only showed this so at the end of the opening sequence then Alice can run to Becky house, but because of the Hull accent and as the actresses I have used are not professional this is not realistic and the film would be a lot better if there isn't any speech in the entire film.
Another change I have made in my film is when Alice is in the bedroom of her new house and hears the noise of a baby in her room and then goes out and tries to find out what the noise has come from and instead of her sitting on the floor I will change it so Alice goes over to her bedroom and then sits on the bed as this will be more effective and look more natural and believable.
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