Second Draft of The Wrong Turn

This is the second draft of my film The Wrong Turn, I still have parts of my film missing as I wanted to have a voiceover at the start of the film and I have filmed two versions but these do not fit in with what I want my film to achieve and I need to re-do these for the final draft of my film.

Changes I have made to my second draft while editing was when Alice is about to walk into the kitchen I made this fade to a red to show that she is going into a danger zone to show the audience that something bad will happen here later. I like this effect and think it works well with my film although the quality of the camera is not that great and I will re-shoot this to improve on the impact on which this has on the audience.

To improve my film further I will re-shoot when Alice is walking through the living room and up the stairs of her house, as I filmed these parts on different days the lighting is different and this is really recognisable this therefore doesn't look professional and needs to be re-shot

I am also going to make slight changes to the ending as the end speach between Alice and Becky is very un-realistic and will be better if it ends as Alice is running as this will leave the opening sequence on more of a cliff hanger and the audience will want to carry on asking questions as this will leave a larger impact on the audience.