Changes to the Second Draft of The Wrong Turn

Costume Change

Changes I will make to the second draft of my film is the costume of Becky so the continuity is correct. As I am going to change the shot of were Becky and Alice meets, as usually Becky walks out of her house to meet Alice, but as I have had to use two separate houses to achieve this, as Alice walks away she does not walk to the correct house and therefore the continuity is not correct, so to change this I am going to have Becky walking through the street and then sees Alice rather than her walking out of her house. Therefore instead of Becky wearing a jumper, she is going to be wearing a jumper, coat and scarf as this is more natural for someone waking down a street.

A Voice Over

I am going to use a voice over at the start of my film when Alice is driving, to explain her past life and why she is moving to her new house; as this will explain the story more as of yet it is not 100% visible that she is moving into a new house.

Flashbacks

After my first draft of my film I have decided to add flashbacks of the protagonists (Alice) past life as this along with the voice over at the start of the film will explain the story line of her past life more and these shots will fit with the codes and conventions of a thriller genre as I will use the double exposure over them to make them look slightly distorted as well as making them black and white to ensure the audience knows that these are flashback. The first flashback I will use is:

 · The first flashback will be of Alice as she has just moved into her house and walks through the living room into the kitchen and then looks outside, this is when I will play the flashback of Alice sitting at a desk surrounded by papers around her, she will then look stressed and annoyed and throw all of them onto the floor.

 

· The second flashback I will use is of Alice looking at the camera screaming and shouting as someone is pulling her down the stairs. This will be played when Alice hears a noise from her bedroom and starts to walk down the stairs of her house. I will play the flashback as she is halfway down the stairs, and I will then carry on playing the shot of Alice walking down the rest of the stairs.